If I was to do it again I would spend more time using smaller movements and keep saving my animation (do about 10 seconds at a time) this will make sure it doesn't crash and make me lose my work.
I think in iMovie the set Movie theme worked well with the heroic music, it fit in well with the story of my Animation and the characters.
My peers in the class gave me pretty much positive comments, they said they enjoyed the intensity of the animation and the action. The critical feedback they gave me would be to use less slower movements, i did at the beginning of the animation but towards the end i started to rush it as i was running out of class time.
Based on the responses, I would film it again, give more detail to my characters, and use less movement to make it look more realistic. Also, with the background i used i would try and focus the camera to make it look further away and get more of the background image in.
Here are my comments from my peers in class, overall they gave me positive feedback.
This is Denhams comment, i agree with this as it would have made my video alot more interesting by having more than just the mans arms moving.
Sophie pointed out that my animation was jumpy, to fix this next time I would spend more time and move my characters slower to make it look more smooth.
I don't know how to change or reply to anything as there was no criticism given!
Again no constructive criticism and a positive comment.
Thank you everyone for your comments! :)
My peers in the class gave me pretty much positive comments, they said they enjoyed the intensity of the animation and the action. The critical feedback they gave me would be to use less slower movements, i did at the beginning of the animation but towards the end i started to rush it as i was running out of class time.
Based on the responses, I would film it again, give more detail to my characters, and use less movement to make it look more realistic. Also, with the background i used i would try and focus the camera to make it look further away and get more of the background image in.
Here are my comments from my peers in class, overall they gave me positive feedback.
Denham's fun box2 May 2013 02:15
I think this is a very good animation I enjoyed the humour and the music in the video, if I was to change something I would change the models so the man stood up.
This is Denhams comment, i agree with this as it would have made my video alot more interesting by having more than just the mans arms moving.
very good matty the video was edited very well and was certainly fun to watch i loved all the little characters very detailed and the background was very good the video was jumpy very creative and loved every minute of it very good no improvement needed
Sophie pointed out that my animation was jumpy, to fix this next time I would spend more time and move my characters slower to make it look more smooth.
I liked your video, It was interesting & funny. I liked everything really. the music was intense and the story was simple. Plus the animation was very well done :)
I don't know how to change or reply to anything as there was no criticism given!
i think your video was good. it was funny and the intensity within the video was excellent.
Again no constructive criticism and a positive comment.
Good animation, well edited. It meets all the requirements for the assignment. If I was to change anything I'd gave the main character more detail and made him look more human.
This comment again tells me to change my main character and make him more detailed, as he wasn't my main idea for a character he was kind of rushed meaning the details and colours weren't the best.
With the comments I have a good idea of what i would like to do if I was to animate again.
Thank you everyone for your comments! :)
